Talk:Volunteering with PERC

I like it. Change lead line to "When I starteded to volunteer at PERC a little over five years ago the reason ..." = more flow? Other than that, a couple of commas removed :-)

Don't change this one, but in future see if the story lead can incorporate the hook right up front rather than a strictly chronological sequence. eg "when I started at PERC I had no idea it would make my sheets whiter than white" or some such.