Talk:Spotlight on Rhonda

Pretty utilitarian read - do you have time to try a rewrite? Would be nice to switch the language from the "doing" to the "purpose" sensu noble purpose or "benefit statements". See this one http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhSqyuPKZU4&feature=channel (about marketing, but principle is the same.

For eg it might be more fun to lead with something about having become "Plant Manager"